Feedback on Rough Cut

We were given feedback after completing our Rough Cut by Rebecca, these are the few points she said:

Our video should start off with the artist in the first shot rather than the character in the storyline.
There are a few shots that need to be changed or cut up such as when Julien is walking to the camera (0:51 in the video).

Another cut up needed is at the pavement shot (1:20) where we should have Ben singing and Julien walking with transition shots.

2 minutes into the video, Ben needs more shots there.

2:37, We need to do 'something' with the shot (apologies for being less specific here).

2:28, Julien should begin running when the beat drops.

And finally change 2:47 - 2:49 because Ben's too small in the frame (he looks like a dwarf).

One of the bigger points is to have a structure with day and night, which we've been trying to do. Simply the video begins in the daytime then moves into the night.

On a lighter note Rebecca states that, "The ending is brilliant."

Thank you for the feedback Rebecca :D