In all our music video had some good shots but we still have a lot to do on the editing, were given feedback after completing our Rough Cut by Rebecca, these are the few points she said and we noted down:
Our video should start off with the artist in the first shot rather than the character in the storyline.
There are a few shots that need to be changed or cut up such as when Julien is walking to the camera (0:51 in the video).
Another cut up needed is at the pavement shot (1:20) where we should have Ben singing and Julien walking with transition shots.
2 minutes into the video, Ben needs more shots there.
2:37, We need to do 'something' with the shot (apologies for being less specific here).
2:28, Julien should begin running when the beat drops.
And finally change 2:47 - 2:49 because Ben's too small in the frame (he looks like a dwarf).
One of the bigger points is to have a structure with day and night, which we've been trying to do. Simply the video begins in the daytime then moves into the night.
On a lighter note Rebecca states that, "The ending is brilliant."
In all our music video is a diamond in need of some shinning come on group 25 team A*
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